to heighten the emotional intensity and expressionist violence of her poetry.
the references to atrocities so disturbing in their incorporation into a poetic performance
that also deploys the language of advertising, mass-spectacle and pornographic self-display - 'the big strip-tease that the peanut-crunching crowd shoves in to see'
the poem figures the crowd's fascinating eyeing of her body parts and fingering of her blood as a debase, commercialised martyrdom.
the reader in turn/or further irony, becomes uncomfortably aware that he/she is one of the 'crowd'
lured into marvelling at the terrible wounds and scars that the work tauntingly chooses to parade
and that while the narrator apparently derides and parodies the 'theatrical' exploitation of suffering 'L.L.' makes use of the very techniques that it mocks and elicits precisely the curiosity that it condemns - in order to deliver it's charged narrative of victimization and revenge.
an enticing vulnerability -
the works have their own quiet narratives
yet placed in dialogue with each other
new strands develop
the works
in a quiet conjured situation or world - allusive -reflective
the subjects are poised and self-sufficient
yet when together they seem engaged in private
conversations and shared understandings
mutual vulnerability
empathy
words fall
like
soft
bruises
some or other
hashtag
harshslag
dark ocean pokes
blind salt
eat sand
flood
the references to atrocities so disturbing in their incorporation into a poetic performance
that also deploys the language of advertising, mass-spectacle and pornographic self-display - 'the big strip-tease that the peanut-crunching crowd shoves in to see'
the poem figures the crowd's fascinating eyeing of her body parts and fingering of her blood as a debase, commercialised martyrdom.
the reader in turn/or further irony, becomes uncomfortably aware that he/she is one of the 'crowd'
lured into marvelling at the terrible wounds and scars that the work tauntingly chooses to parade
and that while the narrator apparently derides and parodies the 'theatrical' exploitation of suffering 'L.L.' makes use of the very techniques that it mocks and elicits precisely the curiosity that it condemns - in order to deliver it's charged narrative of victimization and revenge.
an enticing vulnerability -
the works have their own quiet narratives
yet placed in dialogue with each other
new strands develop
the works
in a quiet conjured situation or world - allusive -reflective
the subjects are poised and self-sufficient
yet when together they seem engaged in private
conversations and shared understandings
mutual vulnerability
empathy
words fall
like
soft
bruises
some or other
hashtag
harshslag
dark ocean pokes
blind salt
eat sand
flood